"A Poem For You"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blue-meanie, Oct 10, 2007.

  1. Blue-meanie

    Blue-meanie Member

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    A poem for you,
    Simple words,
    Complex thoughts,
    Thoughts of love,
    Thoughts of sorrow,
    Oh, How I miss you,
    Oh, How I Love You.

    Recently had to move to Florida from Massachusetts, i wrote this for my girlfriend back home. Let me know what you think.
     
  2. usfcat

    usfcat CaterCreeps

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    Ooh are you in culture shock yet? I moved from NH to Florida 3 years ago. It's so different down here. Fun at first, but i really miss up north now.

    I like your poem btw :)
     
  3. Blue-meanie

    Blue-meanie Member

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    Haha yeah its weird here, dont really fit in :-/. Kinda secluded myself and thats why i started writting :p Im glad you like the poem, thank you.
     
  4. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    simple, to the point
    doesn't try to be anything it's not

    I like it :)
     
  5. myself

    myself just me

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    nice poem
     

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