A Prayer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Hypocrit, Oct 15, 2007.

  1. Hypocrit

    Hypocrit Member

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    these lucid dreams leave Ginsburg incomplete
    half devoured by dehydration, a skeleton to his cynicism
    an ox ghost, strewn out over desolate desert miles

    waking up, skin gafted to Jersey sheets
    my mountainside mind is crumbling from lack of sleep
    the avalanche flushing out my eyes

    3 days sober
    4 months in purgatory
    bipolarity is one hell of a god
     
    Hypocrit, Oct 15, 2007
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  3. Hypocrit

    Hypocrit Member

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    Bumping.
     
    Hypocrit, Oct 18, 2007
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  5. skyfire

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    oooooh chilly...
    second stanza is my favorite...whole poem is haunting though...
     
    skyfire, Oct 18, 2007
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  7. blackheartbitch

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    very haunting. i love it!
     
    blackheartbitch, Oct 19, 2007
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  9. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    this is really good :)
     
    Freakymetalchik, Oct 20, 2007
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  11. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Nice work. Unfortunately, I know how this feels.
     
    redyelruc, Oct 29, 2007
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