Brink of Insanity

At the end of the road
you come upon a well,
by a lake of fire,
red and blue dancing flames cast a spell
you feel mad and alive
losing your mind feels fine
reached the brink of insanity
and realized reality.

 

It should be longer. I like it but it leaves you wanting more.

 

i like it a lot......makes me think.

 

i like it....but as Mr.Mojo Risin' said its incomplete...reread it a few times and see what you can add to it...i want more from this because its amazing...but you dont have to take my advice it is only a suggestion

 

It sounded incomplete to me too but iv been trying really hard to finish it but i cant ill let you guys know if i ever do.

 

we could collaborate if you want...pm me all you have and ill give you some ideas. if you want