A silly poem I wrote today

Land of Bubbles

A billion tiny lives slowly floating by;

Each one filled with peace and love, set aside with time.

Watch the souls dance up high, soon to touch the sky.

Careful not to touch another for fear they’d burst and die.

 

I like this.
Simple and relatable........

 

love the simplicity...i don't think i've read a poem about bubbles, i like it

 

oh cool! not silly at all...we all have our bubbles.

 

Nice poem..I enjoyed it.
I'll share one of my poems with you that mentions bubbles

For You
I caught a bubble in the morning,
this was long ago
I made a wish when you weren't looking
at 12:34
And just to make you feel good,
I made sure that
the lines were perpendicular to your nose
at 12:35

 

Thanks for all the positive feedback.