Some more poetry that I have written

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Cryme, Nov 15, 2007.

  1. Cryme

    Cryme Member

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    Queen (Rough)

    Gypsy queen of life surreal you've placed a curse on me.
    I thirst for you and while you breathe then I cannot be free.
    And when I dream, I dream of you, dreams that cannot be.
    Im blinded by my love for you, Love I cannot see.

    Gypsy queen of stolen souls, I need for you to make me whole.
    I lust for you and lust so strong has robbed me of control.
    And every waking thought of you, every sleepless night I toll.
    the void inside my heart and mind is now a gaping hole.

    Gypsy queen you hide behind your cryptic gypsy eyes.
    Your evil gypsy lies that you conceal through mystic smiles.
    And all this time you know how you have twisted me inside.
    Free me from your gypsy curse so that I may leave your side.


    Pokerface (Inspired by Ghostface Killah)

    The fate of life is like a deck of cards
    Shuffled and dealt with in disregard
    Lost and won but gambled through time
    Some search for hearts but only find diamonds
    Like when you try to make the read and nothings as it seems
    And when pocket eights just dont stack to pocket queens
    Mystified by every little slight of hand
    Fate, the river where I make my last stand


    Cursed
    I dreamt that I died
    and at the entrance to the eternal gates
    it was you that stepped out to lead me inside.
    Our time together, entwined by fate,
    and if she so chooses to lead us astray
    her choice would surely be made in vain.
    Devotion will protect us and keep us together.
    Forever the storms have been weathered by better
    or worse, and what are we if not interspersed
    amongst others that loved and were cursed.
     
  2. bbbeccaaa

    bbbeccaaa 12345678910

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    queen and cursed are my favorites...i really like the way you write.
     
  3. groovecookie

    groovecookie Member

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    Good stuff.
     
  4. The GuitarMann

    The GuitarMann Member

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    Nice. nice. i dig the way tou right too.
     
  5. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    queen was amazing...i liked the other two as well but that has to be my favorite of the three.

    keep writing i enjoyed reading your work.

    may peace and love find you.
    Amber
     
  6. Cryme

    Cryme Member

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    Thanks, I appreciate the support, ill post some more stuff as I write it
     
  7. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    youre good. i like ur stuff.
    :)
     

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