BrOkEn GlAsS lOvE

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Nov 11, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    i wrote this on the night of a really bad break up...
    im still confused about it actually
    i was on the verge of tears for days after it happened
    just now getting over it the details are all fucked up.
    so what do you think of this?


    our love just broke
    like shattered glass
    devestating, painful, tearing me to shreds
    and here i am, left alone
    to pick up the pieces
    each silvery, glittering fragment
    cutting my already bloodied fingers

    i dont know what went wrong
    were you that unhappy
    that without any sign
    with a crash, you break my heart?
    i mean it when i said
    "i love you"...i still do
    did you? do you?

    without warning
    the beautiful art work of glass
    that was our love
    split into a million
    irrepaiarable, shiny pieces on the floor
    will it ever be whole again
    our beautiful, glimmering love?

    you say you still love me
    but do you?
    i wish there was something more
    for me to hold on to
    for you to hold on to
    you say we can be back together soon
    but do you mean that?
    whats the point of all of this?

    theres nothing to do
    but try and piece together
    the shattered glass
    of our relationship
    cut my fingers on all the pieces
    wonder how and why this happened
    and cry by my self.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    i think this is beautiful. I LOVE YOU MORE THAN HE DOES! dont forget that. :)
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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