When you look at me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HawkinsOrchestra, Nov 27, 2007.

  1. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    I pray to God you won't come back here anymore.
    Do you pray with him too?
    I wish I'd known that you were bleeding
    When I sat and watched you reading with the Lord.
    I read with him too.
    Because when you look at me,
    I'll be digesting your legs.
    Because I can hardly see what's in front of me these days,
    and those days too.
    I've got to take what I'm making and turn it into something for you.
    I've got to break what I'm making and turn it into nothing for you.

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  2. Waking Life

    Waking Life Cool looking idiot

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    Unfortunately there is a lot of stuff out there that is better left in the diary.

    Thank you for sharing.
     
  3. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    that wasn't mine, but i'm sure they enjoy the blunt criticism.
     
  4. Waking Life

    Waking Life Cool looking idiot

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    ok.


    Make sure you pass it on.
     
  5. Lady of the Freaks

    Lady of the Freaks Senior Member

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    yeah, after reading your post i agree...there is a lot of stuff that is better left unsaid. [​IMG]
     
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