Nue au Soleil

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by *electrica*, Sep 16, 2004.

  1. *electrica*

    *electrica* Member

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    Tu es le soleil de ma vie?
    C'est ca que tu pense?
    I need my vitamin D
    That's your version, anyway
    But you are no sun
    You're a black hole
    You suck the light
    From my every pore
    You want to be the shine?
    You want to heal me?
    Cure my despicabilities?
    I'm only despicable
    Because I don't love you
    There are a million miles between us
    Et je suis le soleil de ma vie
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I had to run babel fish on this, hopefully it translated correctly! Those parts definitely added further depth to this; I'm really liking your style! Keep em comin!
     
  3. *electrica*

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    Well actually I had to put the french in, cause it's about a french guy and he always wanted me to refer to him as le soleil de ma vie lol.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Soleil Noir ... absorbing, taking.

    The white hole returns,
    to give back this stolen radiance
    from your stellar constellations.

    A luminous whisper, within,
    says here I am.
     
  5. budone

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    you guys make such a fuss about french beeing so "romantic-whatever" language. what is that for? I just wonder.
     
  6. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Did you read her next post? ;)
     
  7. *electrica*

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    Yeah, really, read the third post. It's in french because Canada is half french so we speak it too. And it's about a french guy who wanted to be called le soleil de ma vie, which is actually from a song by Brigitte Bardot, who is french, so it's not my fault. And I don't know what else. I personally don't care for the language.
     
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