David

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by invisiblesnowflake, Nov 26, 2007.

  1. invisiblesnowflake

    invisiblesnowflake Member

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    I wrote most of this one at work today.

    David

    I was naive
    I only saw what I wanted to see
    I thought you were okay on the inside and out
    I didn't know how deep it went.

    You lead a sad existence
    You try to fill a hole inside you
    You like the way it makes you feel

    I thought you were good
    I changed myself for you
    Was ready to give up my good name.

    Now I see the truth
    You are black and ugly on the inside
    You lead a shallow life.

    You may have done some damage
    But that is temporary
    I can bounce back
    The damage you have done to yourself is irreparable.

    You will never know what it is to lead a fulfilled life.
    You will never know pure joy and happiness,
    and I feel sorry for you.
     
  2. heywood floyd

    heywood floyd Banned

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    Actually, it sounds more like you feel sorry for yourself.
     
  3. poopzilla33

    poopzilla33 Member

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    hmmm......i don't think its relevant for anyone but you
     
  4. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    I'm sure many young woman can relate (to some degree) to this piece.
    But poopzilla is right, that it sounds very personal.
     
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