Thursday Night

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Share the Warmth, Nov 30, 2007.

  1. Share the Warmth

    Share the Warmth Member

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    I went clubbin' on Thursday night
    and nothing there was out of sight
    for me

    Drunken fat heads drink and shout
    While too-curvy vixens grind about
    each other

    A girl playing pong
    Wanted me around,
    her good luck guy
    she called me

    but it got to be a chore
    a bore, a snore
    to grant her such a service

    in one corner
    out of the light
    a dark hair siren dosed out of her mind

    she let me sit by
    hand on my thigh
    and bit me on the neck

    a kiss I returned
    only to be spurned
    too kind
    for what she had in mind

    a shake of the head
    and she gave me the slip
    and i became a radar blip

    I walked away
    check out center stage
    where perfect nines are dancing

    take it off, take it off
    to the crowd's delight
    club drunken hotties
    feel no fright

    now some girls wanna dance
    but I can't take that chance

    I just want a friend
    so this night can end
    in some love

    a pleasant conversation
    and more down the line
    are goals to which I'm more inclined

    cause these short fuse kicks
    last just an hour
    and one night stands only sap my power

    last call, and I leave alone
    and with a lightly sad heart, I head for home

    i'm no judge,
    and i don't care to blame
    just means its time to refine my game
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Very nice piece.
    The style with which you began reminded me of Mike Myers in a movie (can't think of the name of the movie right now) where he was receiting poetry at an "open mic" night at some club.


    Edited to provide the name of the movie:
    So I Married An Axe Murderer
     
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