A Love Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MrCoolGuy69, Nov 27, 2007.

  1. MrCoolGuy69

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    I was in love once
    You were all I ever wanted
    How I wished for you to be mine
    The seconds you weren't with me
    Seemed like hours, and
    The hours you weren't with me
    Seemed like forever
    You will always have my heart
    I always see you in my dreams
    You just don't even know,
    How much I loved you
    You kept my life going
    You are the best,
    My everything
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    simple and sweet.
     
  3. MrCoolGuy69

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  4. thcinfectedhair

    thcinfectedhair Member

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    simplisticly cute, more detail.
     
  5. MrCoolGuy69

    MrCoolGuy69 Member

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    yea, looking back on this I should have added a few more lines : (
     
  6. myself

    myself just me

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    Very sweet.
     
  7. MrCoolGuy69

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    ^ thank you :)
     

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