Cry away the laughing day, And smile at your sorrow. Plunge your tears into my heart, And flee until tomorrow Have me sit in agony, Analyzing storms, Bring me back a bright bouquet; Watch it rot; Lose its form. We'll soar upon that floating sheet, Tucked tightly to my bed, I'll drink the essence with a straw, That's flowing from your head. Laughter echoes through the halls, From popcorn-headed men. Lend me your ear, So to raise you up, So to knock you down, So to bring you back again.
Great. I loved the last two stanzas. I didn't really like the first stanza, mainly because it isn't very original so didn't conquer up any images in my head. The ending is very powerful though, well done.
