Breath

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blue-meanie, Dec 17, 2007.

  1. Blue-meanie

    Blue-meanie Member

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    Breath
    Breathe it in, Breathe you out
    Light another, pass it around
    Stand up, sit down
    Close your eyes, think awhile
    Find an easier way or a harder
    it doesnt matter
    Take a walk, look for love
    Sigh, nevermind
    maybe some other day
    Breathe it in, Breathe you out
    Close your eyes, think awhile
    find a smile, find her face
    How long do I have to wait?
    How long, how long...
    one day, way too long.
    Breathe it in, Breathe it out
    Lay down and stay down
    Close your eyes, sleep awhile
    Sleep Awhile...
     
  2. quietthinker

    quietthinker Member

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    such an easy-going rhyme... that's wonderful.. and an enlightening thought is bundled up within its lines..
     
  3. Some call me Jim

    Some call me Jim Member

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    i love it

    kudos
     
  4. blackheartbitch

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    very lovely
     

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