disconnected writing.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by nynysuts, Dec 19, 2007.

  1. nynysuts

    nynysuts No Gods, No Masters

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    I wrote this in the common room at school. I was feeling down and a bit lonely, and the words tumbled out without me thiking about it.

    Feeling a way i shouldn't feel
    In a place a I shouldn't feel it
    I shouldn't feel a way I can't
    Describe
    When I look at the tree
    That's planted outside
    Leaves are Brown
    Sky is blue
    Means much to me, little to you
    From the seat in this room
    To the window
    Outside
    It's where my hopes, my dreams
    They lie.
    This room is one of education
    I have a feeling
    A need to be free
    I have the freedom I want
    It's not what I need
    Let me stare, look, gaze
    At the tree.
    The colours, they scare me,
    Nature's Glory shown
    Nature's cruelty, when
    By the wind, they are blown.
    They spiral downwards
    Feels like me
    Except I'm in a way I shouldn't
    be.
     
  2. myself

    myself just me

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    a very very nice poem
     
  3. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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  4. nynysuts

    nynysuts No Gods, No Masters

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    Thanks!
     
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