The Empty Bed

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by usfcat, Jan 6, 2008.

  1. usfcat

    usfcat CaterCreeps

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    A lame mood caused me to write this lame poem.

    The new, crisp sheets,
    Whiter than snow.
    Fluffy comfortor,
    To snuggle below.
    A fuzzy throw blanket,
    Cozy as can be.
    All the space to stretch,
    Entire bed for me.
    Though it's not enough,
    At night I do cry.
    I wanted freedom,
    Now I wonder why.
    Why am I lonely,
    Why do I ache?
    The hugs we exchange,
    The love we could make.
    But nothing seems farther,
    I know this is true.
    My bed remains empty,
    I'll never have you.
     
  2. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I wouldn't call it lame. Simple, yes. But lame, no.

    I kinda like it but then again, it sort of explains how I've been feeling for the last 18 months or so every time I try to sleep.
     
  3. usfcat

    usfcat CaterCreeps

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    Aw thanks. Hang in there, I'm sure someday we will have occupied beds and someone to snuggle with :)
     
  4. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    I agree, not lame.

    I enjoyed it.
     
  5. Olympic-Bullshitter

    Olympic-Bullshitter Banned

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    A fine writer and communicator, you exude self-confidence.
     
  6. usfcat

    usfcat CaterCreeps

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    You all rock. Thanks a bunch :)
     
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