Anorexia

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HawkinsOrchestra, Jan 17, 2008.

  1. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    Am I wasting my time?
    You are a fool. You hide.
    You’re set on matter over mind
    And I can only help you to help yourself

    You are starving yourself
    And I can’t always be there to force it down your throat.
    Do I have to scream in your face?
    Restrain your body with chains?

    I can’t do this alone
    You laugh silently on the phone
    How do I know
    You’re not just being sarcastic?

    You are a winner at this game
    I assure you however, I am a contender
    And I can keep the beast tame

    I am not a slave
    I will not stand for this much longer
    Open your eyes and see that I am human
    I can make you stronger
    I won’t let your habits defeat me

    You’re the type of person
    That would sit on a stranger’s lap
    In my presence
    Just to make me jealous
    To see if I’m your lapdog
    However, I am not, and will repeat your actions.
    Doing the same to you

    You are pretty and no one will say you are not
    So why do you starve yourself
    As if you want to die?

    Baby don’t cry
    I’ll buy you a mockingbird,
    And If that mockingbird don’t sing,
    I’ll sing for you.
     
  2. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    the last stanza confused me a little...but other than that i enjoyed it a lot.
     
  3. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    Awesome poem.
     
  4. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    this is a personal one. thank you =]
     
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