Sunken treasures of the human heart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Writtensouls, Jan 28, 2008.

  1. Writtensouls

    Writtensouls Member

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    The old rocky window sill

    A house boats soul

    Bobbing up and under the waves

    Between two different worlds



    Daylight sinking into the ocean

    Shading away into oblivion

    Pass swimming silhouettes

    Skinny dipping through our minds



    From a cabin filled with trinkets

    A cluttered home of collected moments

    Sunken treasures of the human heart

    Caught up in life’s under tow
     
  2. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    Daylight sinking into the ocean

    Shading away into oblivion

    Pass swimming silhouettes


    i love this line, it really caught me into a visual
     
  3. mojave green

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    This is great! Just love it! Let's see some more.
     
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