Savor

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Feb 6, 2008.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    I used to fuck up
    cut up, hit up, mess up
    I was that fucked up chick people didnt like.

    How did you seem to change that, my savior?

    You came into my life and fixed the fuck up,
    picked me up and rearranged the broken peices
    and glued them into place.

    The cuts heal and disappear for good, barely leaving scars.
    I stay sober, the bottles of concotions remain full.
    Im not dope up, the once empty bottles jingle full of pills.
    I no longer hide from the world.

    The smile that was lost has returned,
    the laugh that was once silent rings out,
    my heart feels... love, warmth, happiness...
    my mind trust
    my hands and lips touch anothers
    I think Im whole again.
     
  2. HawkinsOrchestra

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  3. Retlaw

    Retlaw Member

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    I like it, its full of emotion
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    ^ thank you :)
     
  5. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I would have to agree
     
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