Love letter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheMadcapSyd, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. TheMadcapSyd

    TheMadcapSyd Titanic's captain, yo!

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    This is a poem I wrote for my love:

    I can never really express in words or actions how I feel.
    I don't think any writer how great ever could.
    But I Know I love you more then any man should.
    And your're the only girl who I would give my own life for

    Nothing pleases my ears more to hear your laughter.
    And to see your smile at the start of every day,
    is a greater joy then anything else can bring.
    Every single thing I have ever heard you say,
    is like the voice of the mythic sirens when they sing.

    Some people tell their love they have the face of an angel.
    An angel though has nothing compared to the face of a godess
    And your beatiful flowing hair is like a glowing aura that falls around your face.
    The body that all this sits upon is one that only the hand of god could ever create.

    I wish I had talk to you more often.
    To hear that heavenly voice of yours.
    And to come off less cold to you and make my own personality seem more softend.
    But please know ****, even if I wasn't to see you for 30 years.
    You my love, is who I would still hold dear.
     
  2. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

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    i liked that.....

    did you give her a copy of the letter?
     
  3. TheMadcapSyd

    TheMadcapSyd Titanic's captain, yo!

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    Yep, in fact it was a copy cause if I had given her the original I wrote in cursive, she would've never been able to read it lol.
     
  4. The Steak Herbert

    The Steak Herbert Member

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    Your a bit weird really aren't you?

    Get a life mate
     

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