My Reaper

Discussion in 'Art' started by Exposed, Feb 14, 2008.

  1. Exposed

    Exposed Member

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    In an art class, and I'm in the illustration part of it. This is a piece I'm working on, and I was wondering if anyone had any input on what I should change or add. I'm not entirely done with the detail, but whatever your thoughts are, I'd love to hear it.
     
  2. Exposed

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    I'm not talking about the one in my signature, it's the one on the link.
     
  3. XBloodyNailPolishX

    XBloodyNailPolishX Forgetful Philosopher

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    Meh, if you want me to be honest;
    take a community college art class. Learn a thing or two about shading and anatomy. It just looks so flat and cartoony. Pretty good job with the clock, but the clain holding it is curved and looks like its not taut. the folds in the reaper's cloth are very fake looking, just lines; no shading.

    Not trying to be mean; just honest (;
     
  4. Slashix

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    Honesty is a crucial thing, you see.
     
  5. Exposed

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    I know there is no shading and it is bland, I thought I had said it wan't finished. lol. This is it almost done, I still am goin to add more. And I am greatful that you said that. Critisism is what I wanted.
     
  6. Ribanna

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    what in my oppininion looks cool
    is drawing movements,
    when you draw poses you gotta have something
    really strong to make it look nice.

    also it's really helpfull to learn how the
    human body works.
    with that i mean how long is a leg campared to the body,
    the arms and all that.
    and how does that leg bend, wich way is not natrual,
    what way is most likely.
    when you learn that you can make real looking drawings.

    (not saying that you cant btw, it's just a tip)
     
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