Evaporation

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Feb 20, 2008.

  1. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    I have torn the books into raindrops
    in my starving madness.
    As I stand in the tattered drizzle,
    I am soaked in the beloved.
    Warm and dry in your mosque,
    how can you know
    why Latif dances
    in the sacred puddles.
     
  2. SvgGrdnBeauty

    SvgGrdnBeauty only connect

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    lol...this one is def. totally Sufi. :) I love the imagery of the rain and being soaked in divine presence and sacred puddles... ripping up literary binds for the freedom of divine experience... I totally feel this one. :)
     
  3. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Wow. This is quite brilliant. Looking forward to more.

    Nice job.
     
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