todays beach

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by green-hair-blue-eyes, Mar 4, 2008.

  1. green-hair-blue-eyes

    green-hair-blue-eyes Member

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    Todays beach
    yeasterdays rolling waves
    tomorrows quiet pint
    a soft and lonely stroll

    the violent beauty of the moments strata
    the reminisced sight of timeless solemnity
     
  2. nynysuts

    nynysuts No Gods, No Masters

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    I like it, it's really different and it's got personality.
     
  3. edenfield

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    captured the days well with the last verses
     
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