Hmm, this is my first stab at writing lyrics in years! Somewhere someone is waiting for you Someone knows your name Someone follows where you gaze Somewhere someone feels your shame But it's a lonely world we live in A lonely World A lonely world Yet when you think that noone cares Somewhere someone is there Someplace somewhere people want you Someplace people know why Someplace where you can be happy someplace somewhere you can cry But it's a lonely world we live in A lonely World A lonely world Yet when you think that noone cares Somewhere someplace is there We may never go where we want to We may never find the way It's the journey you need to enjoy Be it a lifetime or a day But it's a lonely world we live in A lonely world A lonely world Yet when you think that noone cares Somewhere someone is there only my first draft, any hints or tips?
yeah thats good Nyika. very impressed on the last chorus if you alter the last two lines slightly i find it..urm..amplifys the rest of the choruses (cant think of the right word) peace
The first verse is most effective.. very nice. Im not usually a fan of lyrics like this, most people cannot weave meaning into simplicity, but definitely have.
