softly softly...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by edenfield, Mar 5, 2008.

  1. edenfield

    edenfield Member

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    I tried to run, tried to hide
    wherever i turn
    your in my everything

    Tried to laugh, instead of cry
    whichever i slide
    You touch this everything

    From my blood
    to my tide
    Fused inside...,
    He's simply everything

    He holds my heart
    He wears it well
    wherever he goes

    He'll be our everything
     
  2. Jon Butcher

    Jon Butcher Member

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    Really liked this poems flow and rhythm, especially the first two paragraghs.
    And you put your point across well. Nice.
     
  3. Johnnice

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    why i cant take my eye off you?
    because im crazy about you....
    but you dont know that
     
  4. edenfield

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    cemented skies stare me out as i crawl from the floor.
    hawks come first...

    Forrest kings, Fine shepards...
    Entu.


    so fortify yourself, my luv an' all,,
    the celtic seed...
    our ancient glory...

    and ride the fucking weather baby
     
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