words cannot describe me worlds cannot contain me fools cannot understand me favours cannot ever touch me readers cannot subscribe me doctors cannot prescribe me addicts cannot inject me lovers cannot infect me haters cannot depress me science cannot regress me poseurs cannot become me fakers cannot suppress me people will not deceive me debtors will not steal from me seekers will never find me you do not impress me eh? do you like?
Bitches will always love me Sluts will always fuck me Whores will always suck me But Prostitutes always get lucky
I know it destroys the point, but it is a lot more rhythmic if you take all the "cannot"s out. Well for the third stanza at least (which is my favorite). Good stuff though.
oh, I just tried saying it the way it was written, then I tried saying it without and it just flowed a lot easier. Not really constructive at all, just an observation.
