For my sins

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jeret03, Mar 25, 2008.

  1. Jeret03

    Jeret03 Member

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    Well, I'm not the best at this, but here we go.........

    For my sins, this price I pay

    A true love found, here for good
    But all alone, at home you stood
    Being taken for granted, day after day

    You stayed by my side, heart full of love
    I kept pushing you away, shove by shove
    Angry, hurtful words I would often say

    Then one time on a night so dear
    An unforgivable sin would bring you to tears
    From this night on, separate we lay

    My shattered heart aches for a time long past
    I will never love again, she was the last
    She's never coming back, try I may

    For my sins, this price I pay
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    wow i really like this.
    i like how it started and ended the with the same phrase, which by the way, was a phrase i happened to like alot.
    keep writing [:
    <3kit kat.
     
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