Please reand and comment upon my poem

Discussion in 'Art' started by qingren, Mar 28, 2008.

  1. qingren

    qingren Member

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    Withdrawal of poignancy


    Sorry, my heart
    Oh my heart
    I know that every part of you
    Beats in pain

    I know you fear a drop
    A drop of blood to pass through you
    A drop of poignancy
    You fear a hurt of a word
    A hurt of a stab nocturnally
    Or in the beam

    Yet, my heart I love her
    Forgive me, my heart, I love her
    Forgive her she doesn't know
    She feels not what makes at you
    She undoubtedly loves you
    She loves you differently
    She scripted not her feelings down yet

    So, my heart, forgive her
    Forgive me when I loved her at once
    At once you bowed, my heart

    She is awaiting, my heart
    She is there alive
    Be patient my heart
    No matter much time
    How many minutes
    Years and decades you wait

    A day might come where she
    Will be able, a day she confesses
    A day the blood drops won't hurt
    A day where u will be crowned
    The king of Ecstasy Empire
    Imprisoned the poignancy
    She is now the queen
    You are the dewdrop on her petals


    Abderrazak Baddou
     
  2. DelxPez

    DelxPez Member

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  3. chinaraymond

    chinaraymond Member

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    it is good!
     

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