i wrote this poem from a femaless point of view i ssort of channeled my feminine side to write it [daddy long legs] scarecrows in her garden strawberry rows sickle pick and shovel holly hawks grow high flowers bloom then they die orange suns and purple sky all is right can this day just pass me by my eyes turn red then green also blue daddy long legs in the tall grass sway to and fro a breeze from on high little capricorn in a bamboo cradle swings bye and bye this day is as right as rain laying under a tree of stone shadows paint my face time will erase my body by night i shall be reborn as aphrodite acalis a poppie or something beautiful on these lips a poison midnite vast and steady i will suckle a young heracles from my bosom travelling thru a time never seen or heard i am but a dream of my own making a million worlds i occupy with a hour glass to my ears tommorrow sugar eyed and starry i will dance with brother fire and sister rain then disapear to my grave.
i like it but i get confused because the beginning stanzas rhyme and then it stops i dono it was still interesting though
