cross the line

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HawkinsOrchestra, Apr 5, 2008.

  1. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    I walked in your shoes this morning

    I put them on my feet and walked up the stairs

    I tripped on the steps and blamed your shoes

    I stripped my feet bare and saw who I am

    Or at least what you see

    Who are you?

    Who the fuck do you think you are?

    You must’ve been laughing at the kid with the glasses

    You must’ve been laughing at the kid with the pimples

    You must’ve been laughing at the kid with the cheap clothes

    The kid who you copied your homework from

    You laughed so hard you cried

    On the inside

    I just wish you weren’t so naïve

    I just hope one day you won’t be

    The day the Earth gets sucked into the Sun

    Feed the source

    I hope the water runs red with blood

    Learn to swim

    Fuck you and your lies

    Spread the disease

    Crawl on your knees and pray for mercy

    Defend our faith


    You’re all easy
    Come meet me behind the wall where you can’t see me
    I’ll hide in the darkness
    As soon as I see you I will strike you down
    I will show you myself
     
  2. freshh

    freshh Member

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    i really liked this.

    the part about the shoes and stripping your feet bare was pretty brilliant. :]
     
  3. HawkinsOrchestra

    HawkinsOrchestra Member

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    thank you.. looking back on this high this is such an angry poem lol
    but its feelings are so true.. maybe i should take out the part about the girls though but that's really what it was directed towards
    BRILLIANT YOU SAY!
    :) GOLLY GEE CECIL WHITAKERS
     
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