We wrote our names

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by artemisia, Apr 5, 2008.

  1. artemisia

    artemisia Member

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    By the water's edge we used to walk
    Trailing branches through wet sand,
    In a child's hand we wrote our names
    With hearts and feathers and stones and
    To trail our sticks behind our backs
    To turn and watch our paths criss cross
    Unbeknownst, we wrote in the sand of the soul
    Our silent promises, etched in shaky hands.


    Until the ocean's never-ending rhythm beat on
    And the waves came in
    To wash our words away.


     
  2. HawkinsOrchestra

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    i enjoyed reading this
    and the ending is really cool
     
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