A few things

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by OptiMystic, Apr 8, 2008.

  1. OptiMystic

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    These are just a few pieces I have written. If there are any ways you think I could improve please go ahead and say it. They are numbered to easily tell them apart.

    1.
    In words we find dreams
    In silence we find nightmares

    2.
    The skies melt into the trees,
    Creating a beautiful blend of conciousness
    See what beauty our world possesses
    What beauty we behold.


    3.
    A beautiful city sleeping through the night
    This is perversions time to wake.

    A man sits inside the booth
    Five dollars is all it costs
    The show is about to begin.

    4.
    Primal forces help inside until seduction
    Our thoughts run wild
    Left to do what the body desires
    Restraints are no more
     

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