a little poem I wrote, with no real meaning

I hold my breath
Drowning in my homemade self destruction
I say what I'll regret
waiting for my own justice abstruction
I never realized
chaotic dreams can seem to be true
I've been Hynotized
brain washed into believing you
Another forgotten chance
to vanquish the hatred in my mind
Listen to the protestors rants
only then will you not be blind
Words, placed in my lips
Things left too far gone and unsaid
Life, held in my fingertips
I closed my eyes, and I saw red

 

thats silly, to say that the poem has no 'real meaning.' Does it have fake meaning? I think you should be proud of the poem and say "This is a poem I wrote; what dyou think?"
because you should be proud. It's very interesting.

 

well thank you, it is interesting, but there was no real feeling put into it, just random thoughts in my head that I made rhythm to.

 

well your welcome.. I don't knowif I relate to the poem in the way that you do, but honestly thats one of the best poems I've read. Keep writing!!

 

Shouldn't this be in the poem forum? But it's a nice poem I have to say, keep up the nice work ^____^

 

sorry I'm a little new to this forum. I just logged on for the first time about 2 days ago