I wrote these two excerpts, with a little help of mary jane...never finished them..but yeah, looking for a little input Into my eyes bares a soul alone willing to believe what's in front of me and embrace my interpretation how a mind works in whole seeing yourself through a pipeline tunnel reflecting your life cooperating with my brain digressing political views thats the first one...now to the second one, keep in mind..i was stoned Feather breaths, syndicates in a row discover worlds, upon seen distant galaxies in your sunflower crusted pupil I could imagine things seen, things lost in translation only to couch up in my mind, I push my surface discover the worlds I've seen disappear inside an orchid through a twisted dream, impressed the critics to desciple the humanity I believe within my solar coordinates pitted beneath the endorphines multplies the ignorance but yeah, any input on how that was/is and what I need to focus on and what not, my dream is to start writing songs, so any advice on that would be sweet...thanks
