an excerpt

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by wargrave, May 14, 2008.

  1. wargrave

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    An excerpt from something Im working on.



    Something about you lightly wreaks
    In the parlour with hints of nautica we beheld your anus -red-
    as you portrayed it over the years.

    we looked often at our models
    -and wheezed-
    and that was all it took.

    The breath of stale mummy dustingly exhaled.
    -to further Juxtapoz
    a generation gap
    forgotton in plain day


    our models often overlooked us
    as we were much too busy
    distinguishing
    ourselves to realize
    it just blended us further in

    with the piece we grew-- and grow

    untill growth stunts progress and Versus
    traditional common sense...



    'tis a fairly rough draft, brutal critiscism encouraged =)
     

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