Fuck You. I'm Leaving.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Po'It., May 22, 2008.

  1. Po'It.

    Po'It. Guest

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    Fuck You, I'm Leaving.

    I'm tired of...

    Waking up at 6 and fighting ...all the rules binding
    Can't get my mind right from minding, it's blinding
    A sight to start sighting, though ... I always follow
    Only me walking down, those hallways so hollow
    Loading up the A-K, fuck it, I'm losing my breath
    Up every mourning, smelling the stench of death
    Those emails my wife sent, all gone to old news
    Sick of hearing ...how she's with all my old dudes
    Here to serve and protect, but what are we serving?
    Taking over a country ... thats just so undesevering
    I miss my home, my mother, my girl, I cant stand it
    Where are we going with this plane? Fuck you, land it
    I've had it, be loyal to friends? You're all just loosers
    We the centre of the world or just bullies an abusers?
    Yeah, it was a bad experiance, give me a hand to fall
    Are you going to appluad a man who can't stand at all?
    So what do we want? Nothing, we only ask for our needs
    Such a leader you are, request the only task is to bleed
    So, I'm leaving, the army, the country, and don't push
    Because I've seen what you're about, n' fuck you Bush



    Not sure what kind of writing this fits, some call it " hip hop poetry" Because it's NOT rap.
     
  2. little ski

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    hey Po'It, i really liked this!! wasn't sure at the begining coz like you say it's sort of 'hip hop' style poetry, which isn't usually my thing but really got into it by the end. nice work. :)
     
  3. Po'It.

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    Thanks alot girl.

    Send me a link if you drop any poems and I'll leave you soe feedback/
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    this is really good.
    and not only is it good,
    but it actually means something.
    well done.
    [:
     
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