this is moreso a song than anything. It's kinda hard to understand, no real rhyme scheme. You've got about 1 shot, you've got to believe in yourself trusting your insticts, listening to nobody else Making something of the things you've overlooked because a positive attitude brings it all to perspective Step up, show off everything that ya know life is something easily thrown out the window I thought you were truthful, but really you're oblique false and dishonest within the things you speak Tell me lies, trying to get me to believe trying to put my mind into a twisted weave I knew a girl, who was everything a man could ask but she never got through the negative things from her past letting the small things bring her down to there level never giving in to what they wanted, she was one to rebel Make something of the world you were brought into because if you don't, you'll never know what could've been Make something of nothing, a dead flower to a rose Change it up, live it up, show up all of your foes Only you can change what can and will occur Live in slow motion, rather than fast forward blur I thought you were truthful, but really you're oblique false and dishonest within the things you speak Tell me those lies, get me to believe trying to put my mind into a twisted weave
I feel like your poem's saying: Be truthful to yourself, follow your own path, and Confuse me, go on, I dare you. It's kinda got a moralistic tone to it, i'm not sure. you're right, it is a little vague and confusing.
