dancing with the trees

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by stairway2heaven, May 28, 2008.

  1. stairway2heaven

    stairway2heaven Member

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    I would like to feel your face

    when you are dancing with the trees
    your smile never fades
    and your mind is never at ease
    your always dreaming
    and always strong
    your mind is colored
    with silver and gold
    if i had my way
    you would never grow old


    thi stook like 5 minutes and i just felt like ineeded to write so here is what came out. sorry if you dont like it but it just felt good to say. please comment!!!!!!
     
  2. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    I liked it, I felt it was cute, short and sweet.
     
  3. Opinionated

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    very nice =) I really enjoy the images this produces =) keep it up! =)
     
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