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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Jun 5, 2008.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    these emotions i'm feeling;
    inside this mind i'm trapped inside.
    my own feelings that i can't control;
    and it all falls apart.

    and you're gone, you leave me here
    without a clue;
    what am i supposed to feel?
    with these emotions floating inside
    this nothing mind of mine.

    gone all night, you're back in the morning;
    tired, hungover, angry, upset;
    and it's all my fault again.
    so here we go on this roller coaster,
    what am i supposed to feel?




    i haven't written in forever, so yeah i don't know...
    comments?
     
  2. The Instinct

    The Instinct Member

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    Good to see you writing again. By the way, I can't respond to your pm's when they are all full ;)
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    thank youu.
    and ha i fixed that ;P
     
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