a poem to my departed friend

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  1. 2424019

    2424019 Member

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    Just thought I post a poem i wrote to a very dear friend of mine who no longer lives.i hope that this poem can warm others hearts who have also been hurt by losing someone dear.

    In memory of you


    You were always kind
    Blind to others cunning stabs
    Wanting to get into your mind
    Every year I light a candle in memory of you
    Your times with me taught me something new
    You were so true
    To yourself

    You sprinkled your love so generously
    So unashamedly
    That’s why I cannot let you go
    That’s why I still miss you so

    You were always too generous
    Others laughed while you lived so selfless
    But during those times I would have loved to hold you
    Let you know why you were adored so
    Like the gentle breeze in my hot day
    You swayed the sun’s harsh ray
    From my face

    You were turned inside out
    This is how you lived your life
    The same ever day without a doubt
    That’s why I cannot stop thinking of your embrace
    That’s why I wish you were here to wipe the tears off my face
     
  2. weep

    weep Senior Member

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    aww, that´s a beutiful poem!!

    Why don´t you write it in the poetry forum?
     
  3. celeste

    celeste Member

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    So very beautiful,you were very fortunate to have loved each other on this Earth. Peace. "Rain comes from the clouds,sun lights up the sky & hummingbirds do fly"(Everything Must Change;from a Quincy Jones c.d.)
     

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