long and haiku-ish

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by zaras_star, Oct 2, 2004.

  1. zaras_star

    zaras_star Member

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    A mutation day
    Metamorphoses conceived
    In a clay parade

    Charades forge forget
    Do not clean up the mess, please
    No caged time supply

    True self believes more
    Than self-obscure uncertain
    Believe in the truth

    Believe in something
    Even if nihilism
    Sounds reverberate

    Trust instinct blueprint
    Heavy things are not so much
    As elephant clouds.
     
    zaras_star, Oct 2, 2004
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  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Great stuff!! Thought provoking and fun to read. Truly enjoyed this.
     
    KittenX, Oct 2, 2004
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  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Its all good, but these had the most abstract scope, visually mutable.
     
    sylvanlightning, Oct 2, 2004
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