"Piece of shit song"

Discussion in 'The Whiners' started by Orsino2, Oct 1, 2004.

  1. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I won’t run away
    I don’t need a reason why
    With all the things you say
    Running through my mind

    Chorus.
    Only half way needing me
    Too bad I half forgot you
    I know you want your freedom
    Well I don’t
    Tied up with all your reasons
    Enough to numb the feelings
    I know you think its alright
    Well I don’t

    I can’t live this way
    I can’t seem to find the time
    Got to find a way
    To leave it all behind

    Chorus

    And when I leave this planet
    There's things I leave hehind
    I'll never quite forget you
    You're always in my mind

    Chorus
     
  2. Ellied

    Ellied Senior Member

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    thats very good. xxxx
     
  3. mowilde

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    how's tis for some shit?

    here's a little rap i've been hopin to get a beat behind...

    we want peace in the middle east/ alternative fuels are the work of the beast/ burn it on up its an oil feast/ at least turn up the heat, we wouldn't want you to shiver/ forget about the soldier with the bullet in his liver/ there's a river of black stuff flowin over there/ why shouldn't haliburton have their share?/ after all, the US freed iraq/ but they were provokin us, we would never just attack/ we were after those weapons of mass destruction/ not to mention those contracts of reconstruction/ crude production

    chorus.. blah blah bushit have you any oil?/ oh yeah, we got plenty under foreign soil/ blah blah bushit watcha gonna do?/ we gonna drop a bunch a bombs and send the haliburton crew

    what's all this about bio fuels?/ that kinda talk's for terraists and fools/ like usin mules instead of tractors/ next you'll wanna talk about global warming factors/ goddamn actors need to keep their mouths shut/ harrlson'll have people livin in a hemp hut/ but hey! hemp's a menace to society/ a plant of the evil variety/ the piety of every green herb is a lie/ that part of religion don't fly/ we'll stick with eye for an eye

    chorus

    how many times do we have to tell ya?/ we'd never do anything to fail ya/ didn't we mail ya three hundred bucks?/ damn poor folks are some ungrateful fucks/ it sucks this country isn't run by a king/ then we could really let bushism ring/ people wouldn't sing any songs like this/ that'd be the end of this foolishness/ one goulish wish to rule the world/ to see the stars and stripes the only flag unfurled/ the whole world hurled into one last war/ one more needless slaughter just to settle the score/ what's it for?

    chorus

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    communism is a state of mind
     
  4. weep

    weep Senior Member

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    That´s a good one, Orsino2!!!
     
  5. mowilde

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    yeah. if you're on the verge of killin yourself. what's with all the gloom and doom? aren't we all still alive?
     
  6. Orsino2

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    God... I'm just looking through a box of songs I wrote. There's some from last year still in here. I've got to get rid of some... there's like... single verses on paper and ideas I started... Here's one from about five days ago. I used to post songs all the time on here. Somewhere along the line I quit bothering.

    What you see here is my heart bleeding
    For your voice, for your smile
    What is told here is a tale of needing
    To be in your arms, been a while

    Why can't I breathe in this tiny room here?
    Why can't I see through these lies?
    Why can't I run through these walls here?
    So I could gaze into your eyes

    What I feel here is my heart bleeding
    And I can't recall, the fall
    What is said here is a tale of needing
    To be near you, that is all

    Why can't I breathe in this tiny room here?
    Why can't I see through these lies?
    Why can't I run through these walls here?
    So I could gaze into your eyes

    meh... the epitome of suction.
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    I could trip over my rug and I could land into my desk with crashes
    And I could come in on cue when discovery health talks about rashes
    But you never seem to be so amused at the simple things.
    And I’m trying to be in your eyes someone that I can't ever be

    She thinks that Jim Bob does it better than me
    No matter what I do
    So I write songs about nonsensical bullshit just to prove that I can do it too.

    I never leave my room and I play guitar twenty-four, seven and feel depressed
    And the neighbors still knock on the door as if they are guests
    And I can’t believe that these are the reasons why I feel so bad
    And it’s not as if your fantasy is something you could even have

    She thinks that Jim Bob does it better than me
    No matter what I do
    So I write songs about nonsenical bullshit just to prove that I can do it too.

    I keep this lyrical shit I write next to Michener and Orwell
    As if it’s some work of art
    And it kinda makes me feel like Arthur Fonzerelli
    Only after jumping the shark

    He could repeat his sister’s name in masturbation, sweet pleasure, and dismay
    Or ask Jim Bob to explain himself in my own peculiar way
    But it looks as if I’ll have to win your heart another day
    Fuck this, I think I'll just go become gay...
     

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