kate pt 2

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tra1lerpark rasta, Apr 20, 2008.

  1. tra1lerpark rasta

    tra1lerpark rasta Senior Member

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    dark hair around her face
    and the stars i pulled from the sky
    she holds in her hand.
    this beautiful creature named kate.

    i cant escape this sadness i feel
    because tears are salty and bitter
    they taste like sadness
    i know now the true meaning
    of love its sharp and brutal
    its ripping my insides apart
    trying to get out.
    hereis my valentine to you
    my trainwrecked valentine
     
  2. tra1lerpark rasta

    tra1lerpark rasta Senior Member

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    this love i hold in my bloody hands
    like a car crash
    the sun feels like broken glass
    in my eyes
    i wanna hide in your shadow
    forever and swim in your veins
    in a bloody ocean thats on fire
    i feel the daylight gently slip away.
     
  3. tra1lerpark rasta

    tra1lerpark rasta Senior Member

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    down the spiral staircase of dreamlands
    soft whisper
    in darkness i feel the wind blowing through
    this city of death and decay
    the wind does whisper your name at nights start
    to its end driving me mad
    static and dust buzz around my ears
    i see your face in the blackness
    when i sleep.
     
  4. tra1lerpark rasta

    tra1lerpark rasta Senior Member

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    in the glowing tip of a cigarrette
    i find no closure
    just let me know
    finally that love death and ecstacy
    have found me all at once.
     
  5. tra1lerpark rasta

    tra1lerpark rasta Senior Member

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    shit i cant believe i wrote that
     
  6. Major Peacenik

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    pretty avant-garde, breaking it up into separate posts. that alone gets it five points from me.
     
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