I hear your heart beating so fast I hear your aching heart I feared this moment here at last I see the tears forming in your eyes That round, brown innocent eyes Today we are breaking all ties I feel the grip of your hand around my arm I feel you shiver I wish I could make you calm I smell the sadness in the air “No” you say fighting your dismay All this is just not fair I get out of your car It’s been my longest walk thus far I wave goodbye My hand so heavy We have just broken the last tie
One of poetry's great themes- love and loss. Short lines to mirror your discomfort and the pain you're in. I think it's a very good effort. Thank you!
