I see potential greatness, keep it up. Good ol ohio rocking out the new heavy metal bands, fuck yeah! !,,!
lose the "hardcore" shit and you will be on your way vocals need some work sounds to young would be the word I guess, but others wise not bad.
You've got wierd name for your band... I must agree with I Kill Emos with the vocal part. And the guitar part was kindof sounding like it was slower than it should be at some parts and than vocals should be a little louder. And a little cleaner. I liked the beginning of First Time's The Charm. I would like to see you live as you sound quite good... Something from around 2 mins of Bring Back The Night was reallly badass ^^