i dont care if you read this

idontcareifyoureadthis

its not easy
suddenlyhavingadifferent
life to yours
i shared my world with you
was it just a wonderful dream
now it seems like
ivewokenup
and its one of those dreams
you only have once
and strive after your whole life
just
to
live it
again

when we seemed to part
istolesomeofyourlife
and you kept some of mine
i want us to keep the pieces
forever
and reunite them one day soon
under a rainbow
racing
from
the
heavens saying
im still yours
and your still mine

just let me know

 

Great flow and neat use of appended words! And ain't it true, when u really love somebody something of you remains in her and she in you.

 

thank you.
if that was all true, i probably wouldn't have been able to write it.

 

I like the way you've made your own meter and rhythm and used run on words which mirror your thought process.

 

yeah people don't think in regular stanzas do they? hehe.

 

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

 

Excellent wordplay executed creatively! This was quite the enjoyable read, thanks for sharing

 

i couldn't keep it to myself.....running around an otherwise mostly empty head.
thank you!

 

aaaahhhhh...the story of my life...

i feel like you spoke for me in this poem...^^***

 

really? wow. thanks.

 

what is it about

 

it's just about people and their feelings, about life. tis just a poem