And what?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by autumnspiritplay, Aug 8, 2008.

  1. autumnspiritplay

    autumnspiritplay Member

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    And what should I compare you to,
    The full-blown moon?
    Or the slumbering stars
    Which await the trance of our night?
    Of all the feelings I have for you,
    There are none so true
    As the calm, blue view
    From the core of my heart.

    To start,
    I love you no less
    Than the hills love the sky,
    Thrusting higher and farther
    To try-test the best in oblivion.
    I love you
    (but more)
    Than the waves love the shore,
    Lapping at the edge of the earth,
    (Or contagiously re-birthed)

    They say as we grow old
    The soul learns the weight of control.
    But as far as I can imagine or see,
    The slightest brush of your touch
    Does not so much entrench
    but free,
    And so I know not
    Of this bog
    That they speak of.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i really liked this poem
    the story of love the life the fullness
    of your words gives love its lightness
    amongst the thorns of love..
    lovenpeace from saff
     

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