Hey, I just started writing poetry after I fell deeply in love with a certain girl =). I'd like some constructive feedback so I can improve my technique. Thanks in advance "It's Your Love" It's not your looks, no matter how pretty Nor your brains, no matter how witty. It's not your eyes, no matter how blue Nor your smile, no matter how true. It's not your hair, no matter how smooth Nor your voice, no matter how it soothes. It's your love. It breathes life into me, and never lets me be. It wears down the walls around my heart, making all the darkness depart. It sheds light upon my day and helps me to allay. At the end of my storms, it's my olive branch-bearing dove It's your love
well, it won't get you that elusive P word most of us are hoping for: Published but it might get you that lesser elusive P word: Pussy
