Security and Stability are such horrid things They make life so mundane and ordinary I want to live life I want to see the four corners of the earth I want to scream and dance in ecstasy And to wallow in sorrow and pain But nothing would be the worst of all The same house everyday The same people everyday The same hopes for life every morning only to be let down by nightfall Please let me live I want to love Go on the road and see the Haight Ashbury The last lingering utopia of this earth And why should I wait around until life's gone And it'll be a mad rush to do all the things I've wanted The time is now
very good for one of your firsts...my advice keep at it you could become really good. may peace and love find you Amber
off topic:It makes me smile to see your age beside's these wonderful thoughts or better to say besides this soul crying for Freedom, for Life! to Live, to Err, to Fall, to Triumph and to recreate life out of life! on topic: keep writing and posting!
Chris, your poem sums up exactly how i feel at the moment. searching for something much more than the mundane bordem of a repetitive existance. i really love your poem, its great. keep writing.
