One of a few.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ZeroxBleach, Aug 27, 2008.

  1. ZeroxBleach

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    Critique. I'm sure this poem or lyric isn't that great, but by all means say what you will.


    In the travels I have seen
    Running rabbits in the green
    Sometimes I wonder if I am still here

    Take a stash of something
    See a lion and a plane
    Ohhh, the Lord only knows
    The Lord only knows
    What I am seeing

    Friends and family I hear
    Only animals are near
    Sometimes I wonder if I am still here

    Demons break through my mind
    Racings colors so divine
    Ohhh, the Lord only knows
    The Lord only knows
    just What I am seeing

    Where in the hell have I gone
    Where in the hell have I gone
    What the hell have I become
    Why the hell do I not run
    How in the hell
    How in the hell
    How in the hell do I get out of here


    Ohhh
    I just don't know
    Which way to go
    Ohhh ohhh
    I just don't know
    Which way to go
    Ohhh
     
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