Amazing?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Moonjava, Sep 16, 2008.

  1. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Minds go racing
    Thoughts retracing
    Hearts beating faster
    Creating disaster
    Blood is pumping
    Knees are weak
    Desire's at its peak

    Eyes are closed
    Intentions open wide
    Reality fading
    Self control dies

    Your arms wrapped around me
    My head on your chest
    Cigarette smoking
    Two are undressed

    Was it amazing for you?
     
  2. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    I wouldn't say amazing....but I liked it :)
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    ^agree

    also,

    <---sloppy seconds
     
  4. lilbear

    lilbear Don't prick a raw paw!

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    I love all those feelings!!!
     
  5. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    I like it more the more I read it.....reminds me of s...e...x...:)
     
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